My favorite sentance was probably the same one as you Mrs. I it was "The rosebushes of shame on his face became bouquetsof love". I think that there is a lot of feeling in it because instead of saying his face turned from red into glimmering shine and smile he put it in a totally different way. I just like could picture his face in a in my mind tuning from bright red to glimmering and smiling. Well I think that my spot that I could connect with was the first day of school for him and for me going in the first day of school this year in 7th grade. Like seeing all my friends and just knowing that I wouldn't have to go to school not knowing anyone. Like he had a friend but the only difference was that I did not like anyone on the first day of school so thats the only difference. So that was my connection for the story.
Friday, September 14, 2007
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Hey Lexi.
I Loved your seventh grade post. it made me laugh. do you want to hear my connection? I did the same sentence! ha ha, that is so not very funny. sse ya!
Carly
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